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Post by immaculate14 on Jan 24, 2005 19:02:20 GMT -5
Land of Shadowing Wings
Worlds still turning, poetry in motion Moons still lounging, waving to the ocean
9 prisoners, 9 planets rebel, in a system named solar, trapped in suns jail
3 wise men still stand with Orion Most peaceful man on Earth was still crowned a lion
Bees still intrigued by the feathers of birds Broken hearts still finding love is just a word
Lucifer still remains, the prettiest angel Mirrors still reflect your greatest enemy when they frame you
Wind still carries secrets, and whispers sweet nothings The clouds still weep, and tomorrow keeps coming
Rainbows still ribbon the sky, marvelous wonder Lightning’s to fast to fear, so we scared of the thunder
Sky’s still blue from reflecting off the sea And the suns still beautiful to outreaching trees
Equator still embraces earth like warm hugs World still quakes as Atlas’s shoulder shrug
Gods fingers still spinning, spiraling the galaxy Show me selfish, show you when love becomes tragedy
Spirit of a dreams still held in dieing breaths Judas still kiss cheeks, and die a 1000 deaths
We still sing hymnals and listen to psalms And we still read suras and pray with clasped palms
Universe still bathes in meteor showers Constellations tell stories during bedtime hours
Justice still standing, tipped scale and blind Hate still takes learning, divide man from kind, mankind,
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Post by SAMURAI36 on Jan 27, 2005 7:38:37 GMT -5
PEACE 14: Your work is awesome!! ;D
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Post by immaculate14 on Feb 3, 2005 4:33:06 GMT -5
appreciate the kind words. I have read some of the pieces you wrote and could easily say the same thing about you. highest regard, peace.
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Post by jonnygemini on Feb 3, 2005 22:04:34 GMT -5
PEACE
beautiful...I had to say it out so I could hear the IMMACULATE flow of words...thanks
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Post by Godssoulja on May 8, 2005 18:12:40 GMT -5
This piece has a nice flow to it. When you read it it just flots smoothly off the tongue nicely done.
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